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brighteyes's picture
brighteyes
58 pencils

could've done better with the tagline.

sneakyhands's picture
sneakyhands
1857 pencils

i like the tag. overall it's a nice piece of spec work. good job.

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diagnose yourself?

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Bland. Very beginner level thinking.

fs's picture
fs
40 pencils

Show us hoe real professionals work, then. Our advanced friend.

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first idea

mattlittlegym's picture
mattlittlegym
342 pencils

Actually this is very nice. And take a look around at some of the best advertising. Look at the Snickers work. Literal translations are funny when done right. The problem is most of you don't know how to do them right or don't understand the humor. You'll learn some day. Good job on this ad. I'll keep an eye out for you after you graduate Circus.

hard_core's picture
hard_core
146 pencils

I hear ya. I like this stuff. It was a great way for a student to use what he has available to make a piece of EFFECTIVE advertising. Cheers

luispiter's picture
luispiter
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brndnrap8's picture
brndnrap8
170 pencils

I wish there were 3 of me so I could have a 3some with myself... mmmmmmmm

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STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

Can we add more glow to the logo?

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singye's picture
singye
180 pencils

be nice

gertrude's picture
gertrude
12 pencils

Who is this man? I think he's beautiful. It is hard for me to objectively judge an ad with such a beautiful man in it. And to have him playing doctor on himself - well he could doctor me anytime!

Seriously though, very funny ad, and very effective. Not as good as this one though:

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/foreign_affairs_magazine_one?size...

sneakyhands's picture
sneakyhands
1857 pencils

sounds like he's closer than you think.
;)

pyramid's picture
pyramid
19 pencils

vaca a la vaca

des4graphic's picture
des4graphic
282 pencils

basic photographing technice, and basic art work I think.

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