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someguy's picture
someguy
Activity Score 674

And if this were a term paper, they'd be in big trouble. But it's not.

Phil Lestino's picture
Phil Lestino
Activity Score 1684

For an ad that relies on copy the style is very clunky. I think starting sentences with And is what schoolchildren do.

chuckieT's picture
chuckieT
Activity Score 680

"I think starting sentences with And is what schoolchildren do."

You sound like you are very old.

someguy's picture
someguy
Activity Score 674

And if this were a term paper, they'd be in big trouble. But it's not.

ChuckN's picture
ChuckN
Activity Score 139

The copy aims to be intelligent but sorry, it is not.

chuckieT's picture
chuckieT
Activity Score 680

This whole campaign is a bad version of the very famous Neil French campaign for Chivas Regal. Every copywriter should know it...

http://www.neilfrench.com/chivas/slide/index.html

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lingarajasivanaiah
Activity Score 39

Awesome , I am a school going kid

Lingaraja Sivanaiah

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