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Guest's picture
Guest

I think USA Didnt understand the meaning advertising

Guest's picture
Guest

boy do these blow.

mikelite's picture
mikelite
1031 pencils

I disagree. I think AOfTW has become Archive Magazine online - high execution, low concept, low headline. Ads here in the states have more emphasis on the words. As a writer that likes to write, it works in my favor. maybe the system made me this way, who knows. but, whatever, it's a perfectly fine headline. Better than most, I'd say.

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Guest's picture
Guest

looks like somebody here has never been featured in archive.

ivan's picture
ivan

I somewhat agree. I tend to choose well crafted ads even if they are not so good on concept. But I do love copy ads as well.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

izmild's picture
izmild
770 pencils

I think this ad for segemented target of a culture. I'm not sure how people catch the message...

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
1607 pencils

Art direction is non-existent here. Bad Photoshop, bad font choices, non-appealing color schemes, what is that background? The lines aren't great either.

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I think, therefore... yeah.

Guest's picture
Guest

cupcakes are tasty but pancakes are on a completely different level.

Guest's picture
Guest

hard to read, maes me throw up a little

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thefakehuman
410 pencils

I consider Ads of the world as a platform where we all can see ads from all over the world... We can post comments if we have an opinion.. The point is to stay intouch with the ad world. Thx IVAN... This Ad on the other hand is pretty nice... especially the copy

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Dale's picture
Dale
370 pencils

Maybe I'm just hopelessly thick but I've been watching this ad for three days; could somebody enlighten me as to which three deadly sins these contain? It feels like there could be something there but it's falling flat for me.

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mark3r's picture
mark3r
1940 pencils

Worst art direction I've seen in a while.

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NatalieM's picture
NatalieM
1687 pencils

The copy is good. The art needs work. It is way over done for being way under done.

teenie's picture
teenie
1894 pencils

I thought that line sounded familiar:

http://www.commando.com/infiniti+harley.htm

A stranger abroad's picture
A stranger abroad
427 pencils

IMO these lines are way above average. They add value to the product. The art could be improved, yes, but the bones are perfectly sound.

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