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Pedestrian's picture
Pedestrian
486 pencils

Ordinary

Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
7004 pencils

What's the tease?

I think art director did a better job than the copywriter.

himanshu prabhakar's picture
himanshu prabhakar
473 pencils

jacks you have to do better work first then advice another!! i seen your http://jackmancer.com. please

Himanshu Prabhakar

Roshan Quintus's picture
Roshan Quintus
669 pencils

He is a good critique that’s all what matters here in this forum isn’t it? :-)

bite me

Yarp's picture
Yarp
387 pencils

Gotta agree with Jack...the headlines aren't really doing it for me.

Guest's picture
Guest

Couch cushion and the banjo line are fun! This one could use a little explaining.. I guess it's the chip that is the tease cause it's so good. Overall very strong campaign and love the design.

raulbanderas's picture
raulbanderas
357 pencils

nice art

Guest's picture
Guest

Nice campaign.

Guest's picture
Guest

Ignore the negativity above, guys. Keep at it.

Guest's picture
Guest

Jack is the one of the best cretique of the AOTW. He has a very good knowledge about creativity. Keep it up Jack. Yes, ignore the negativity above.

Guest's picture
Guest

questionable

jackblack's picture
jackblack
2261 pencils

Like the illustrations.

jackblack's picture
jackblack
2261 pencils

Like the illustrations.

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