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certaintly's picture
certaintly
4056 pencils

this one is better,
good, even.
AD is pretty boring though, not too appealing

Bob.C's picture
Bob.C
1135 pencils

Like the copy, it needs color and contrast to work better visually (e.g. the flares should have been dealt with behind the thin Y and ~~~ )

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