what can i do to improve my work.....

SIR.
this my mini camp for Nestle everyday dairy whitner,
can u pls guidance, to improve myself....

what can i do to improve my work.....
what can i do to improve my work.....
what can i do to improve my work.....

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Guest

1st thing u can do is translate all that into english so that everybody can read and understand waht u r saying.

Other thing is, its more like a story board of a film. for print u should add more concept to it. its a nice thought but there's something missing and may b that is an "idea" or "concept".

seeing ur work, i can easily say that u can do a lot better than what u've done.. take the idea to the next level..

*patience is better than guts"

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fiendsmix
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brove

but the most import thing in ad is our ideas,so show the more the butter not only the hand drawin'

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