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Anima's picture
Anima
Activity Score 59

.....This one works.

I almost cried listening to it.

This is coming from someone with Asperger Syndrome who normally expresses apathy or even schadenfreude.

The emotional impact is definitely there and these kind of ads need that.

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Wordnerd
Activity Score 6692

wow. who wrote this? 'to my friends i leave one less friend'. great skript, strong words. awesome.

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Guest

booooring

enjoy you're AIDS

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Carlos Garcia
Activity Score 847

Excellent copy. Awful Voice-Over.

CG

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Guest

Brilhant!

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Guest

Great !!!! The voice-over in english was sure made for awards entries and adsoftheworld??? (would like to hear the portuguese copy)

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Hibon
Activity Score 3736

Nice work.

Simple ideas are the best !

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Guest

superb
brilliant copy and the saddest voice ever, just like I imagine a dying man.
made me shiver.

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ShaniG
Activity Score 17214

To the radio listeners, I leave boredom.

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TRICKY
Activity Score 3954

Great!!!!

The man who stops advertising to save money is like the man who stops the clock to save time

Anima's picture
Anima
Activity Score 59

.....This one works.

I almost cried listening to it.

This is coming from someone with Asperger Syndrome who normally expresses apathy or even schadenfreude.

The emotional impact is definitely there and these kind of ads need that.

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Guest

For the ShaniG, I leave the envy.
The spot is superb!

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Guest

Simple and so very good. Straight from heart

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Guest

Can you tell me where I can find the original ad? I'm from Portugal and have never seen it.
Thanks in advance.

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Guest

View the original ad at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pt9nw3G8tDQ&hl=pt-PT
The copy is still great in Portuguese, and the voice-over is much better imo. The images, however, are not that great.

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gmint7
Activity Score 2683

:::J:::

your girlfriend is 'pwned'...

:::J:::

Guest's picture
Guest

Great copy, gave me goosebumps. Not boring at all, as they said before: straight from the heart. Good job

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Guest

Brilliant. Just the ending note could have been another vo.

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Guest

not bad. not great. maybe slightly shorter, or make some of the copy more interesting- less generic. the last few sentences are great, but the first are kind of insipid- to my grandfather... I don't know, maybe you should draw on stuff that show you a little about his relationship with his friends, for instance, the bicycle we used to go double on, i hope you give it to your son bobby, and tell him when he's older etc., bring some of those things out. work work work!

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Guest

hey, 1. try and make the listener know this guy who's dying by saying a little more, in fewer sentances. Maybe by illustrating some part of their shared past with a friend. e.g: Bobby, that bicycle you first taught me on, i want to give it back to you, give it to your son, maybe some day you can also tell him, why....

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PERP
Activity Score 433

Come on, it is brilliant! It makes you pay attention, it makes you want to listen the next sentence, it makes you wonder what it's like. Straight to the point, very good work and bravely executed.

.: look for the green giant on the label :.

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