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createwitty's picture
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createwittyThursday, May 12, 2011 - 20:47

not bad in terms of d idea connecting wid d message...i dont know abt time but d art work surely sucks...looks like work of a student...they shud hav left some sand in d top half of d hour glass in d 2nd representation indicating dat still time is left nd already he has started hating d job.. wud hav made more sense..

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ace85leThursday, May 12, 2011 - 22:16

Concept is so so. Execution is terrible. I suppose this campaign targets the adults.

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bhuvneshwar.chdFriday, May 13, 2011 - 00:57

art direction is awesome,
keep going.

"If you are irritated by every rub, how will you be polished?"
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KriativityFriday, May 13, 2011 - 02:49

haha..but i agree with createwitty about the 2nd hr glass thing..

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Themadartist1972Friday, May 13, 2011 - 06:35

rubbishhhhhhh

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LuikahFriday, May 13, 2011 - 08:11

NO great insight behind. Bad art direction. Copy is a cliche.

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dean viiiFriday, May 13, 2011 - 10:02

wow is this horrendous. thought (if you want to call it one) is based off a bad pun that doesn't really work. And that thought doesn't come close to paying off the tagline. The thinking is all over the place. Even if it did make sense, the hourglass lines are extremely bland.

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elyoshiroFriday, May 13, 2011 - 10:49

The concept is interesting

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kleenexFriday, May 13, 2011 - 13:03

I hate the copy.

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kleenexFriday, May 13, 2011 - 13:03

I hate the copy.

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shahidaliSaturday, May 14, 2011 - 04:58

Awesome idea. Execution can improve.

shahid

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LewisdotcomSaturday, May 14, 2011 - 21:11

not sure about idea. also ziploc does definitely not make the food keep the flavor longer, it just keeps the food from turning bad, witch is not the same.