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rcantalice's picture
rcantalice
37 pencils

shouldn't the women be doing a naughty face or at least smilling?

kergu's picture
kergu
6785 pencils

its not necessary.jajajajaja.. nice visual idea

jazarah's picture
jazarah
1262 pencils

hahahaha I like, but the girl don't seem to enjoy it!

muxa's picture
muxa
602 pencils

Wanna make this work better?

Put a texturized background or some furniture and use the shaking effect only in the girl.

This girl should also be doing a naughty face or at least smiling a lot.

The way it is now makes me see the photographer shaking, not the girl. So the execution is killing the idea.

brain123's picture
brain123
830 pencils

When I first saw it I thought the dildo featured a built-in camera...
With the changes you suggest, it would make total sense.

sold's picture
sold
3219 pencils

now we talking! good solutions.

doworkson's picture
doworkson
242 pencils

agreed. and i maybe wouldnt show the product, just the copy "Yoba. Erotic Toys."

capywriter's picture
capywriter
5511 pencils

good thought muxa... nice idea anyway

graphikamaal's picture
graphikamaal
111 pencils

Great observation muxa about the photographer shaking instead of the model.

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sonucoues2002
804 pencils

confusing the cunsumer
wht they try to promot
i mean if sum1 change the brand logo like put cannon logo place of yoba and write "cannon -now available with vibration mode" thn it makes sence to me.but wht they did in the ad is confusing the cunsumer

execution killing the idea and the brand but i like the girl smile,looks like a mordern monalisa to me

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Geko's picture
Geko
161 pencils

nice, after all.

chinaski's picture
chinaski
951 pencils

very nice and simple!

teenie's picture
teenie
1894 pencils

Shaky image and a naughty toy--it's pretty obvious to me. The campaign could use a little diversity instead of 3 of the same, but I like it.

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everartz
7611 pencils

yea yea..
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fractalrene's picture
fractalrene
1506 pencils

The idea is good, the art direction should be re-thought. I would think about what muxa wrote.

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niniasufle
407 pencils

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