Yamaha YBR 250: I lied to my boss

Advertising Agency: Mccann Erickson, Medellín, Colombia
Creative Director: Germán Camelo
Art Director / Copywriter: Raul Rodriguez
Creative VP: Samuel Estrada
Published: October 2009

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satrianee's picture
satrianee
3748 pencils

It says "print" above. Really?

Maybe the copywriters can not find a good way to summarize an idea... then, it's not a "print" to me.

ivan's picture
ivan

I'm not sure I understand the concern correctly. By print I mean press ads, posters, etc. Is that not ok?

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satrianee's picture
satrianee
3748 pencils

Exactly. This looks like a blog post instead of a poster. There is no company logo even.

silvi's picture
silvi
4172 pencils

Sometimes, long copies has sense. Not in this case, i think.

Srivatss N Iyer's picture
Srivatss N Iyer
121 pencils

I didn't understand the message

vidya.shankaran's picture
vidya.shankaran
724 pencils

Me lost!

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dave.swanson
127 pencils

The copy wasn't well-done. In today's world, if the story isn't intriguing then you've lost 90% of your ADD ridden audience (including myself). So If you can't make it short and sweet, at least make it catchy and interesting. Don't ramble on like my Aunt Elma at the christmas feast after a bottle of scotch. This ad, sadly, reminds me of dear aunt Elma.

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shahidali
4063 pencils

unfortunately, they lost it somewhere. the idea of getting lost with teenagelike exuberance and little mischiefs was good and goes with the brand & TG but the team couldn't handle it properly. too long a copy and the twist is not reflecting.

shahid

rolling.stone's picture
rolling.stone
2740 pencils

i love copy based ads, but in this case it doesn't seems having much substance

jogging one has still some bit of quality but this one ...................

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the201's picture
the201
19 pencils

El target de esto es gente aburrida que le gusta andar en moto? Que mal, no creo alguien vaya a comprar una YBR después de ver esto.

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