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my god, such stupid writing and art direction!

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How and why?
It would be like me saying your comment was worse than drinking vomit... without explaining why... i.e. what's the point?

digifool's picture
256 pencils

The copy writing is very cliche and expected. I'd lose the tagline. It's redundant.

The art direction isn't bad but it's been done before.

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Seriously, can 'art directors' please not be allowed to comment on body copy and headlines? Most never even read the copy before slapping their graphics everywhere so they should keep some perspective that maybe their thoughts on what is cliched, etc are ... uneducated.

And you should know the 'tagline' is most likely a 100% requirement from the client so it has to stay.

k-rocka's picture
428 pencils

Love the tagline, simple but effective.

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