i don't see a concept here at all. i'm guessing the illustrator credit is a joke. or did he recreate the logo in illustrator for you? anyway, i would pick a different client than wonderbra to do student work. there's already been way too much incredible work done for them. anything you do will be compared to that.
Must agree with above. Maybe try another brand who should be doing edgy stuff, Wonderbra is a too easy target and too similar to where youre trying to go with these.
As far as credits go don't forget to include the creative director, art director, visualiser, designer, finished artist...
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Huh? I might disagree with you, Ravi.
Big does not translate to far does not translate to good.
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far away so close would be better . anyway still has a big whole to become a good solution.
The illustrator did a excellent job!
I can see if they win awards or something, but there has been a lot of pretty average student work shwoing up here recently.
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Fake ad
Not fake, student.
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Didn´t like this one.
thanx ppl 4 all dat words will dfntly cum out wid more gud stuff
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i don't see a concept here at all. i'm guessing the illustrator credit is a joke. or did he recreate the logo in illustrator for you? anyway, i would pick a different client than wonderbra to do student work. there's already been way too much incredible work done for them. anything you do will be compared to that.
lazy copy.
Love the Illustrator credit. Laughed my tits off. ;D
>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.
Must agree with above. Maybe try another brand who should be doing edgy stuff, Wonderbra is a too easy target and too similar to where youre trying to go with these.
As far as credits go don't forget to include the creative director, art director, visualiser, designer, finished artist...
== Bring back fags, lard and the biff.
This is FAR from good....way far behind!
"Bowww Wowww"
this one has passed me,anyone shade some light please.
first thought concept.
so far..... it is good:)
i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.
i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.
i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.
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haha, big props for the illustrator
thats it???
Copy is slapped on the layout.
Done. The Ad is ready.
Sorry. there's a branding too.
A lil more effort done inspite of copying and pasting the text.
:)