creativemobs's picture
18 pencils

Awesome Copy, Excellent Layout!!!

Hats off guys...

tango48's picture
7 pencils

leaves no place for comments, says it all itself

prajith kumar's picture
prajith kumar
52 pencils

Hats off guys...

Black.Rainbow.'s picture
162 pencils

Not bad, though I think the concept of amputation might have been stronger.

In adition, the word 'reduces' sounds a little technical in that people rarely say about themselves 'I want to 'reduce' weight'.

Rather, words like 'loss' or, in this case, 'lowers' might lend it a more natural connotation.

In addition, I think using the word 'you' or 'your' would be more direct, more powerful. 'Smoking lowers your weight' might be stronger, for example. Or 'Lose weight. Smoke.' and so forth.

Still, it's reasonable, if lacking a little sophistication in the wording department.

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Brainchild Theories
74 pencils

ha! fabulous

shaun027's picture
4 pencils

Sometimes more is less. Brilliant, concept through to execution!

Irina Kaiser's picture
Irina Kaiser
60 pencils

The tagline is excellent!

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