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Vetinari's picture
Vetinari
110 pencils

this is lovely. it would have worked much better if R2 had actually been on a conveyor belt, as opposed to a billboard.
and the copy works better with a colon instead of a comma.

brandsurgeon's picture
brandsurgeon
693 pencils

I agree. With the colon comment. I'm not so sure about the conveyor belt thing.
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Vetinari's picture
Vetinari
110 pencils

i just think it would be better in a realtime situation, like a crowded airport, mundane luggage, and then.. R2!, larger than life and twice as squeaky.
the crowd can be backgrounded and blurred. the impact of R2 being on the conveyor belt would work like a charm.
perhaps.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

Yeah that would work much better, unexpected too, and it could run as the ambient arm to go with the poster campaign.

Since you were on about colons, it got me thinking, do reckon R2D2's colon looks like a DIN socket?

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Vetinari's picture
Vetinari
110 pencils

i don't know what a DIN socket is, and i'm too lazy to reach for the mouse, open a new window, and google it.

i hang my head.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

Its the multiple pronged feminine part of a tv/video connection cable. And it looks disgusitingly similar to a cats anus, I couldn'help but notice.

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TopJeff
479 pencils

Heh.... great way to get your companion there without buying an extra plane ticket. Minor thought, but I do think his eye should be lit up to emphasize that it's not just an R2D2-shaped suitcase.

Jeff

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postman's picture
postman
951 pencils

Do you think he was freezing down there in the freight compartment?

ChiowD's picture
ChiowD
2 pencils

It was my bad on the colon. I submitted these too quickly.

nemesis's picture
nemesis
761 pencils

I like the ideas, but the artwork is lame.

kc_brock's picture
kc_brock
703 pencils

does han frozen in carbonite fit here somewhere?

rd

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