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this is crap. sorry guys.

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and you believe the public will understand this and relate to it? Really?

SJB

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wonderful

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Bad

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Nice call to action...

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Thank you for all response.
I'm one of the students who made these ads.

Our target is wayward use no direction who don't care about anything.
This ads go with a street event that people actually can write their idea on a cement.
We came up with the event idea first, and these print ads followed.
These ads would be clings, which are placed on street as a part of cement. As you may feel, we struggled making print ads which could go with the street event.

Here is a great opportunity for us to know people's reaction and opinion except for in class.
If you don't mind, We'd like to get more suggestions,opinions, and ways to make them better for our reference.

We really appreciate that you spent time for us.
Thank you.

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it's an interesting thought using cement to encourage people to vote, but honestly who's going to see this? when i'm walking down the street i don't pay any attention to the ground. nobody does in fact. it would need some color, something that sticks out to get my attention. the lines are abysmal. i mean brotha inda crackhouse? come on guys, that is a terrible line. in fact all the lines need to be trashed. find a new copywriter or have your copywriter think of at least 200 more before considering editing this campaign.

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Thank you very much for your advice.
ok we'll think how to get attention more, and keep working for lines.

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ghastly

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may be it is the copywriter you should put in the cement...

Is it not "In Gold we trust"?

Yvan C. Goudard | Brand Manager | Froggystyle
LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/yvancgoudard | Web: http://www.froggystyle.biz

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