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Nike Diesel's picture
Nike Diesel
Activity Score 13630

i feel your comment

Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
Activity Score 6992

It was fun till I read the swag-logo.

Free tip; "I", as in first person, is always in capital. Also in "I'm".

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eins-eins-null
Activity Score 892

i agree. the "swag" is one too much.

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copyjoe
Activity Score 7

Thanks for the comment, we will look more into the 'Swag' & change the grammar.

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kabirahmed
Activity Score 40

Fucking Awesome! (y)

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copyjoe
Activity Score 7

Thanks! Much appreciated.

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Owolawi
Activity Score 1530

Awesome rhyme,very mellow and flows quite well.

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aryjoecreatives
Activity Score 8

Thank you!! www.behance.net/aryjoecreatives for more of our work.

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Siddarth Basavaraj
Activity Score 1673

It drove me through those standing tall yesteryear's of VW, nice :)

Love creating ads..

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aryjoecreatives
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Thank you!! www.behance.net/aryjoecreatives for more of our work.

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Shawali
Activity Score 8442

Nice copy except that god awful pun and the use of the no less awful word "swag".

The art direction is kinda dull and not very evocative of that nostalgic feeling in the copy.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

Nike Diesel's picture
Nike Diesel
Activity Score 13630

i feel your comment

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kleenex
Activity Score 45936

nice ads.

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