Volkswagen Beetle: Black

The 21st century beetle.

Art Director: Aryven Arasen
Copywriter: Joe Watson

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12 comments

Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
7004 pencils

It was fun till I read the swag-logo.

Free tip; "I", as in first person, is always in capital. Also in "I'm".

eins-eins-null's picture
eins-eins-null
867 pencils

i agree. the "swag" is one too much.

copyjoe's picture
copyjoe
7 pencils

Thanks for the comment, we will look more into the 'Swag' & change the grammar.

kabirahmed's picture
kabirahmed
40 pencils

Fucking Awesome! (y)

copyjoe's picture
copyjoe
7 pencils

Thanks! Much appreciated.

Owolawi's picture
Owolawi
1475 pencils

Awesome rhyme,very mellow and flows quite well.

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aryjoecreatives
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Siddarth Basavaraj
1665 pencils

It drove me through those standing tall yesteryear's of VW, nice :)

Love creating ads..

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aryjoecreatives
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Shawali's picture
Shawali
8385 pencils

Nice copy except that god awful pun and the use of the no less awful word "swag".

The art direction is kinda dull and not very evocative of that nostalgic feeling in the copy.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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Nike Diesel
13339 pencils

i feel your comment

kleenex's picture
kleenex
25590 pencils

nice ads.

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