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mikelite's picture
mikelite
1031 pencils

very pretty, but that's all

Arisca's picture
Arisca
164 pencils

my thoughts the same

Minimum's picture
Minimum
1496 pencils

oooeh strong image

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.nl's picture
.nl
207 pencils

Nice image, but not verry clear an explosion.

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it is very explosive

Advertising Pawn's picture
Advertising Pawn
419 pencils

Strong image, bland copy. Powerful enough for me even if I don't sea how the idea of a water nuclear explosion is specific to children (and thus to Unicef).

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PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture
PaulyG_fill in ...
1148 pencils

I agree that the copy could do a better job. But I think that they've done a good job of showing how devastatingly large a number like 1.5 million children dying is by comparing it to the death count that a nuclear bomb would bring.

Nthngmn's picture
Nthngmn
626 pencils

thats a little extreme dont you think? mushroom cloud....polluted drinking water? ehmmmmm, no.

PaulyG_fill in the blank's picture
PaulyG_fill in ...
1148 pencils

1.5 million children. people don't realize how large a number that is. But people see that mushroom cloud and automatically attribute it to a monstrous level of death and destruction. Makes you really stop and think, holy shit, that is a lot of kids.

Skotte's picture
Skotte
24 pencils

How nice it must be fFor you to live in a place where you can take water fFor granted like that.

jillduly's picture
jillduly
2 pencils

Nice concept. I agree about the copy too. The image is great, but would have made the
text more readable (not white on grey), I had to search for it a bit- the viewer might not bother.

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
3647 pencils

I wish I could post images... This exact idea was done, only much better...

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

You can post an image! If you use the tag img between <>. I can't copy and paste it for you because it won't show up.
You can find it in the Formatting guidelines down at the bottom of the page.

dave78's picture
dave78
40 pencils

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San Pateste's picture
San Pateste
139 pencils

nice

AriesDW's picture
AriesDW
172 pencils

I really like the art direction behind it. Pretty clever yet nothing that is too far from the imagination. Some may call it unoriginal . . . However, it is pleasing to the eye and clearly makes a point. Bravo.

Rog's picture
Rog
6094 pencils

Cool image, but doesn't connect/relate strongly enough with the line for me.

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rodadv's picture
rodadv
18 pencils

Ufff que buen arte y el concepto dentro de todo igual me gusta. Al menos el arte le da todo el peso a la comunicacion.

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Ad Fanatic who hate Rip-Offs...'s picture
Ad Fanatic who ...
58 pencils

The water still looks "fresh" and "clean" despite the treatment of it like a nuclear explosion though! But nice art direction, but it doesn't cover up for the lack of concept.

bigbadfatmadafaka's picture
bigbadfatmadafaka
488 pencils

seen it twice in 2005.

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A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

Where did you see it twice in 2005?

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

Shhh. don't ask it questions. Just let it be, maybe it will figure out things on it's own.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

OK, but I want to know! He always says 'been done' and never says where.

Frustrating!

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Skotte's picture
Skotte
24 pencils

Probably because if he tears down other people's work, then his own work will seem that much more impressive. But if he actually identifies where he's seen images in the past, then it defeats the purpose of his attack because he acknowledges that the previous ads are memorable. So he (like so many people who hawk about this site) simply say "*yawn* seen it." And never have to say anything else.

Ignore them. They are envious liars.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

Yeah that just summed up what I pretty much thought.

I can now happily ignore those sorts of posts.

Cheers

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otto54's picture
otto54
381 pencils

Nice idea, but the water is too much trasparent.

jennywhx's picture
jennywhx
1142 pencils

Photographer: Joerg Kritzer
im only interesting with him, super nice photography.

A. J. SMITH's picture
A. J. SMITH
2838 pencils

Ooh, thats a nasty image.

I like it.

halfstring's picture
halfstring
288 pencils

The concept could be stronger if there was a sense of scale. Right now, it feels like the explosion is confined to a kitchen sink but then again, that might be intentional.

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

Interesting point. Having more of a size reference might be good here.

Spanky's picture
Spanky
4898 pencils

nice idea. slight disconnect equating polluted water to a nuclear bomb. but it works.

vexguy's picture
vexguy
93 pencils

good work...

Barbz's picture
Barbz
93 pencils

I like it! Great sucess!

sk's picture
sk
12 pencils

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Guest's picture
Guest

the AD is great! but i think the text should be at the bottom right. so that it will be readable. well, it's my opinion~

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