Travel Planet 24: Venice
You travel with your mind everyday. Wouldn’t it be nice if your body could follow?
Advertising Agency: The Syndicate, Athens, Greece
Creative Director: Nicholas Koligiannis
Art Director: Socrates Karamanidis
Copywriter: Nikos Pechlivanidis
Photographer: Getty Images
Published: June 2008
11 comments
good idea, creepy execution
nice
Ah, yes. It is a good idea, but you might want to rethink the presentation.
-Natalie
http://www.nataliemarion.com
Good copy, trash execution.
Age.
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Good nikos, bad socrates.
Wasn't there a Futurama episode with flying brains making everyone dumb?
Thats not a mind, its a brain.
Your mind takes you places. Wouldn't it be nice if your body followed? - ditto
Add insult to injury then burn the candle at both ends.
:: Put your ears against the ground so i can walk over what you heard::
i don't see how that's good copy. the word "you" is used 3 times in one sentence. surely there's a better way to write it." take the body places the mind already goes." i don't know if that's better but already there are no "you's" so at least it's possible. i know, i know. it's a dumb thing to nitpick on. but trust me, judges in shows take off for all kinds of stuff so you have to put your best foot forward.
Erm, right. Ditto.
Add insult to injury then burn the candle at both ends.
:: Put your ears against the ground so i can walk over what you heard::
I love te purple filter on the sky.
No, wait a minute…
I don't like it!