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Dale's picture
Dale
Activity Score 370

I think this is the strongest of the three and communicates the best. My only nitpick is I don't like the bit of copy that says "ideas work thoughtfully alongside one another". I think it's trying to shoehorn one more 'thought' play in and comes across as not the right adverb for the job. It is a nitpick though and I like the ad.

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karankal
Activity Score 52

This works much better than the engineer kneeling on the floor.

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sneakyhands
Activity Score 1857

agreed. i wish my idea wall would form an image.

jomo's picture
jomo
Activity Score 62

Both are great.

cperry's picture
cperry
Activity Score 280

Nice idea and well executed.

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beigedogg13
Activity Score 76

Nice work.

Hibon's picture
Hibon
Activity Score 3736

Nice idea but is that a non smoking room ?

Simple ideas are the best !

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G.J.
Activity Score 149

Nice.

slip's picture
slip
Activity Score 919

Wonderful :)

*****

SJB

Dale's picture
Dale
Activity Score 370

I think this is the strongest of the three and communicates the best. My only nitpick is I don't like the bit of copy that says "ideas work thoughtfully alongside one another". I think it's trying to shoehorn one more 'thought' play in and comes across as not the right adverb for the job. It is a nitpick though and I like the ad.

- The only thing more rare than a good ad is a good guest comment -

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