I think this is the strongest of the three and communicates the best. My only nitpick is I don't like the bit of copy that says "ideas work thoughtfully alongside one another". I think it's trying to shoehorn one more 'thought' play in and comes across as not the right adverb for the job. It is a nitpick though and I like the ad.
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This works much better than the engineer kneeling on the floor.
agreed. i wish my idea wall would form an image.
Both are great.
Nice idea and well executed.
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Nice work.
Nice idea but is that a non smoking room ?
Simple ideas are the best !
Nice.
No matter wat you do,
33% of the people will love it,
33% of the people will hate it,
And the rest won't give a fcuk.
Wonderful :)
*****
SJB
I think this is the strongest of the three and communicates the best. My only nitpick is I don't like the bit of copy that says "ideas work thoughtfully alongside one another". I think it's trying to shoehorn one more 'thought' play in and comes across as not the right adverb for the job. It is a nitpick though and I like the ad.
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