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ivan's picture
ivan

Oh, what does the tagline say my Brazilian and Portuguese friends?

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

copywriter.txt's picture
copywriter.txt
828 pencils

Ivan,
Tilibra is a brand of spiral notebooks, scrapbooks and more. They doesn't made pens.

The tag says: Pages are stories.

ivan's picture
ivan

Thanks a lot guys!

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

ramosraf's picture
ramosraf
115 pencils

It means: "Pages are stories"

klug's picture
klug
173 pencils

Something like "sheets tell stories" (the word by word translation would be "sheets are histories").

thiagovalenti's picture
thiagovalenti
2 pencils

The tagline says "Pages are stories".
And in the pen it's written (and I think no one had noticed) "One day I will be a draw"

copywriter.txt's picture
copywriter.txt
828 pencils

The translation of the headline can be found below the ad.

swiss_adguy's picture
swiss_adguy
36 pencils

about the pen:
using the pen's mine to integrate the headline is a very nice and witty solution. however, i believe that the pen would have needed to be enlarged in order to read the text.
plus, i would have varied the pens' color once red for the love letter, one blue or green or whatever other color that there is.

about the brand that is represented:
if they do not sell pens, i don't see the point why this ad would have appeared. if it were done for BIC, then it would definitively work, you wouldn't even need a beautifully shot paper background.

credosian's picture
credosian
272 pencils

this looks more like a PEN ad than as a paper or books ad.

rethink guys. rethink.

remember what u r selling??

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Barbz's picture
Barbz
93 pencils

Desagree dude. Pretty simple and good idea. Clean execution. I like it!

Qbird's picture
Qbird
142 pencils

and me disagreed with u too..
its simple and execution is clean... 'cos there is only one pen on a clean paper.. how complicated can it be here..
they are selling spiral notebooks, scrapbooks... so wats so good about them??? what is the different about them?? i agreed with credosian.. i can use these pen to write in any paper or even ON THE WALL since its the INK that will turn into a master piece..
nothing mention about the main product..

"rethink guys. rethink.
remember what u r selling??"

Bauducco's picture
Bauducco
297 pencils

Nice one.

SARAG's picture
SARAG
22 pencils

Not good

Guest's picture
Guest

Where can I buy in US? I found a notebook in a US "Dollar Store" about 4 years ago "Dollar Stores are the absolute lowest end of US retailing. These "Dollar Stores" sometimes get unusual items that they sell for a dollar but the supply is never consistent. Can you tell which US retailer sells Tilibra Notebooks. Thanks.

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