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phoamcor's picture
phoamcor
Activity Score 1284

Slightly over-hardcore art direction, nice line. I like.

nice gaijin's picture
nice gaijin
Activity Score 815

I really enjoyed reading these and I think they're quite lovely, but I'm not sure what medium these are meant for, and where they are to be placed. There's a lot of text and the imagery lacks the contrast and visual punch to make people stop and read everything.

Really though, gold star for Mr Delibato.

phoamcor's picture
phoamcor
Activity Score 1284

Slightly over-hardcore art direction, nice line. I like.

Leafs fan's picture
Leafs fan
Activity Score 26

Nice art direction. Relatively provocative headlines. But it reads like a high school essay. Such a topic demands equally provocative copy. Read Tim Delaney's copy for Timberland back in the day.

mattlittlegym's picture
mattlittlegym
Activity Score 342

I think the headlines should have been written a few more times. The art direction is weak. I am looking at expected objects. Looks like a museum ad. Should have dug a little deeper to make this more interesting.

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