ecflagcorp's picture
108 pencils

Cool approach. I like the no windows thing. That would drive me nuts. Pretty cool too that all the photos have a fence around them too. Although, the photos need more mood to them. Because even though there are no windows, the mood of the coloring/lighting doesn't feel like "More than 1000 women live as prisoners in Switzerland".

monicamexico's picture
830 pencils

It is a good idea . . .but the copy is weak and there's no call to action. Also, it's the exact same thing three times. Try to think of new ideas to mix it up.

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