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jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

this ad.. is crazy photoshoped... it sux....

Roland Young from the Art Center of Pasadena would call this BANKERS VISION!!!!

its pretty bad....

concept is horrible... its too in your face.. its too photoshoped looked... helljust do the damn photoshoot next time!!!!! it seems like they just got pictures from corbis.com of a plate, a fork, tooth brush, knife and put it in. Its crazy photoshoped i dont like it.

I give it an F - - .. because it sux.

concept i can understand he's trying to affilate garlic with stinky breath but still would i want to buy something that would give me stinky breath? hell no. Its not even humorous. It doesn't give any reason to buy it. Now i hate budapest ads more than indian ads.

congradulations.. you made me hate the world even more!
-jason

mik's picture
mik
16 pencils

Yo Jason

I agree with u. It is a bad ad. Bad ad happens. Give critics, but stick to facts! Its just a ad!
Nothing else...
Budapest its not soooo bad.

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

Jackass ur username is even wrong

Although a pro took the shot the art director screwed up badly

Mo's picture
Mo
648 pencils

Haha..

thoainguyen's picture
thoainguyen
78 pencils

I find there is no reason for me to buy a product that make me smell like a garlic, Do they will give me a toothpaste for free if i buy Tabasco?

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

ha jasongchang.. stop jacking my ending quote... your like a xerox machine. so unoriginal.. grow up..

but as for your comment you left i will have to agree with you in some points... but in the long run.. what you depicted is somewhat wrong mainly because advertising should give people of the target immediately what i need to buy instead of all this research.

And yes for PS2 ads.. although they have awesome art direction from TBWA or Chiat Day.. i will say the concept doesn't make sense.

ads are supposed to make sense.. not be mindless dribble.

im glad dalbir commented on his own ad.. but in reality.. dalbir although you may disagree since its your piece.. this piece sux.. many will agree it sux... this is the type of stuff people get fired for at big ad agencies... if i was the owner i would give you, your 40 days. Consider this ad terminated. and come on why are you wasting your time posting on a ads of the world forum.. go do your job.

-jason

minx0r's picture
minx0r
62 pencils

Just as toothbrush and tobasco don't sit too well with you Jason, neither should xerox machines and growing up, 'so unoriginal'.

One of the BIGGEST problems on all ad sites that are dedicated to 'international' advertising, is the acute failure amongst its members to realise that as much as 'garlic sauce and toothbrushes' are over used in certain parts of the World, it has yet to come into play in others and works perfectly.

Don't be a wank0r and take center stage only to slate what I think is a pretty good ad considering its Budapest. Remember you have most likely not spent more than a couple of days in Budapest and don't speak the language or understand the culture... so don't look like an idiot and try.

"im glad dalbir commented on his own ad.. but in reality.. dalbir although you may disagree since its your piece.. this piece sux.. many will agree it sux... this is the type of stuff people get fired for at big ad agencies... if i was the owner i would give you, your 40 days. Consider this ad terminated. and come on why are you wasting your time posting on a ads of the world forum.. go do your job."

ROFL.

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ivan's picture
ivan

I can relate to this ad as a Hungarian. It's just one opinion, but I like it. This ad actually tells a short story in one slide. Good job, I would be proud if I did it.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

mik's picture
mik
16 pencils

Hey guys

Do we talk in this Forum about ads or do some guys talk about
"Who-Got-The-Longer-Penis" in the ad industrie.
So, if somebody get insult, so please calm down.

Its just advertising.
Peace.

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

tooo be blunt and angry

anyone can win awards.. i seen a million crapy ads from creative annual, CYMK, and Archive. and i only found 4 ads out of the whole damn magazine that are good. Just because you win an award means nothing.. except that you won an award.

Thats basically the factor.

The ad still in my opinion lacks an edge to sell the product, and the art direction sucks. And unlike ivan and me... i dislike story ads, because it makes things too complicating.

-jason

minx0r's picture
minx0r
62 pencils

Are you by any chance standing in for God whilst He is on vacation?

You keep brining up your opinions like its engraved in cheese in a Museum in Ethiopia... get over yourself and encourage rather than '...my opinion lacks an edge...'.

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jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

Haha this is such an entertaining argument
i just have a weird feeling dalbir got so angry at the comments that he just told everyone in the building "GOD EVERYONE GO ON ADS OFTHEWORLD.COM AND LEAVE GOOD COMMENTS ABOU MY AD." Obviously Dalbir you need to do your job instead of posting on ads of the world.

I also disagree with who ever says 80% of the ads on ads of the world are good.. thats BS. Only like 10% are good. I dont settle for crap.. build your eye. or should i say "THE EYE OF MORDOR!!!" MWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA! <- A Little weirdom.

and o ya.. who ever is imitating me.. right on

your starting to sound more like me instead of that pompous Jason G Chang. At least someone as their baby mouth of mordor.

:) My work is coming out you see.

-jason

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

i already do.. im doing the photoshoot this week :)

ive been doing tobassco for some time.
ill submit into CYMK and Creative Annual and if you see it.. dont be suprised.

-jason

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

and by the way.. go do your job.
hell if i was your boss id fire your ass

-jason

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

congradulations you know how to use google.. and im not 21. lol

porn blogs? wtf? thats BS.

whats sad about this is that you guys just made your argument worse by stating that a 16 year old can give better ads, and give better crits then you 30 year olds. :-p.

-jason

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

PS my mother knows :)

-jason

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

does yours?

jasonjchang's picture
jasonjchang
126 pencils

hmm obviously you guys should also pick on someone your own size too :) ....

but then again.. i already competed thus far so in the long run

i leave my final crit on this ad.. it sux.. and i bet if it went into circulation big woop no difference to tobassco sales other than that this ad was runned. Its a crappy ad with crappy art direction, most people before i left a comment even said this ad was crap. And it is. its almost as boring as most of Dalbir's stuff and yes i know how to use google. the edge is wrong and honestly i think this ad sucks.

Obviously as i e-mailed ivan a while back i mentioned i was a student and i am. and obviously my work would go into student work. It doesn't take a genius to figure that.

All my point thus far and before i close this ad due to request of my advertising instructor, who works your professions, i will say once again this ad is crap.

if you guys want to send more hate comments go right ahead i wont read em. But Ivan and Dalbir will and i bet they would be very pleased to read what you guys have to write about me, and obviously most of you guys would rather just say praise this ad! rather then boo.

Don't settle for the toyota of the group.. settle for the mercedes as i say. So i will farewell to this comment box with once again this quote... this ad sux (notice my kid slang).

freedom of speech prevails and wait for my ad in the student section :-p. Ill show Dalbir up.

-jason

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jasonjchang
126 pencils

by the way the bling bling pic on your website makes you look like a queer dalbir. Or more of a nerd.. and lose the turban makes you look boring, oh wait your ads are boring. What am i saying?

o ya an indian (hindu) friend of mine checked out your ad.. he said it sucks. so i guess its just not me eh? he also read some of the comments i made says im right. He actually wrote that quote above.

-jason

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stapel@creative...
24 pencils

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stapel@creativebits.org's picture
stapel@creative...
24 pencils

I think this ad works. Fact that the tooth brush looks a little bit photoshoped. I am half-Hungarian, I was living in Hungary, I know that this ad can win prices in east- middle europe for inst.:golden drum and in Hungary would be successful.
Congratulations.

J.

admarkjamaica's picture
admarkjamaica
4 pencils

I guess that after you eat food with the sauce, you need to brush your teeth to get rid of the taste. I think I'll run out and try that to see if it is so.

dangerouzmc's picture
dangerouzmc
111 pencils

Phew!

dot.dot.'s picture
dot.dot.
25 pencils

I really like where this ad is going.... I would have just placed the toothbrush on the other side of the knife and fork and instead of the bowl/plate I would have rather used a place mat or something...

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