Swimex Fitness & Wellness: Candles

Swimex Fitness & Wellness: Candles

10 years. A lot of breath to blow candles.

Advertising Agency: Loop Comunicação, Curitiba, Brazil
Creative Director: Thiago Cardoso
Art Director: Patrícia Hirozawa
Copywriters: Martin Castro, Thiago Cardoso
Published: March 2008

Your rating: None Average: 6.1 (14 votes)

Comments

Submitted by Rafapargos on Thu, 2008-03-27 14:33.

Very nice art.
Very bad copy.

Submitted by a2o on Fri, 2008-03-28 03:29.

Exactly... I agree

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Submitted by Mr Hughes on Fri, 2008-03-28 06:15.

ditto

Submitted by poojagadodia on Fri, 2008-03-28 07:07.

http://www.watgame.com
i too agree..

Submitted by Javi Ending on Fri, 2008-03-28 17:11.

I see where the copy's trying to go, it's just written so badly.

Submitted by thico on Sun, 2008-03-30 10:49.

I'm brazilian and in portuguese it sounds pretty good. For sure the translation is the problem.

Submitted by FefeCa on Sun, 2008-03-30 12:50.

I agree. In english sounds strange but in portuguese make sense!
Good art and copy!!

Submitted by marianabeck on Sun, 2008-03-30 13:30.

good job