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Swimex Fitness & Wellness: Candles

Swimex Fitness & Wellness: Candles
Your rating: None Average: 6.1 (14 votes)

10 years. A lot of breath to blow candles.

Advertising Agency: Loop Comunicação, Curitiba, Brazil
Creative Director: Thiago Cardoso
Art Director: Patrícia Hirozawa
Copywriters: Martin Castro, Thiago Cardoso
Published: March 2008

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Rafapargos's picture 2 pencils
Rafapargos | Thu, 2008-03-27 14:33

Very nice art.
Very bad copy.

a2o's picture 139 pencils
a2o | Fri, 2008-03-28 03:29

Exactly... I agree

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Mr Hughes's picture 392 pencils
Mr Hughes | Fri, 2008-03-28 06:15

ditto

poojagadodia's picture 194 pencils
poojagadodia | Fri, 2008-03-28 07:07

http://www.watgame.com
i too agree..

http://www.WATGame.com

Javi Ending's picture 124 pencils
Javi Ending | Fri, 2008-03-28 17:11

I see where the copy's trying to go, it's just written so badly.

thico's picture 7 pencils
thico | Sun, 2008-03-30 10:49

I'm brazilian and in portuguese it sounds pretty good. For sure the translation is the problem.

FefeCa's picture 6 pencils
FefeCa | Sun, 2008-03-30 12:50

I agree. In english sounds strange but in portuguese make sense!
Good art and copy!!

marianabeck's picture 6 pencils
marianabeck | Sun, 2008-03-30 13:30

good job

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