6 comments

damnson's picture
damnson
9598 pencils

No.

An axe murderer of ads.

Zarathustra's picture
Zarathustra
60 pencils

Looks good enough and I see what you were going for but just doesn't hit the mark, feels far too easy, far too obvious and a little cheap

Thus spoke

kleenex's picture
kleenex
34600 pencils

Not good enough.

james.t.kirk.50's picture
james.t.kirk.50
8 pencils

I get where you're going with it, but you need to take it further.. This seems like a first-round idea..

Luj's picture
Luj

The idea is there ! the execution is not strong enough. A little improvement and this will be an epic Ad !

VeronicaFranco's picture
VeronicaFranco
669 pencils

Disappointing

“Advertising; A judicious mixture of flattery and threats.”
― Stephen Leacock

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