Starburst: Contradictions, Pale people

Tropical. But thoroughly enjoyed by pale people who burn easily.
It's a pack of contradictions.

Advertising Agency: TBWA\Chiat\Day, New York, USA
Art Director: Lacey Waterman
Copywriter: Jim LeMaitre
Illustrator: Lacey Waterman


Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
6996 pencils

I like the copy but I think the art director, based on this ad, is TBWA unworthy.

HappyHour's picture
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Something tells me if the agency name weren't credited these would be getting much lower ratings. I don't really see anything special here. I'm not really getting 'pack of contradictions' as a big idea, and the visual doesn't communicate "Tropical" at all - I had to look closely at the packshot to understand what the copy was even talking about.

TiltedChairCreative's picture
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I agree completely. It seems like they clung to the "pack of contradictions" idea without regard to how it fit with the product. And I would by no means call that "extraordinary copy." That's absurd. It's two lines, and it's formulaic. That's not extraordinary copy.

Tarquin Biscuitbarrel's picture
Tarquin Biscuit...
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Yeah - I'd like to know what makes it a pack of contradictions. I mean, apart from some clever copy.

DBB's picture
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Great copy !!

luispiter's picture
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good copy.. i like it

mdb1974's picture
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Premium copy. Serviceable art direction.

Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
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Copy is awesome, I agree the art direction doesn't "own" the copy, perhaps cuz it was under deadline, if not then I definitely recommended the AD go marinate her mind on ffffound

LeeHarvey's picture
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Hehe, her name is 'lazy'....

Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
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I knew I've seen this text-ecution before

Sdb's picture
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Like it!

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