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etan's picture
etan
Activity Score 192

great insight, clever copy

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CuriousPencil's picture
CuriousPencil
Activity Score 4225

Great idea, and solid [something-]axial art direction. Would *really* like to see what the other proposals were here - the mimeographed texts side by side do work. But I'd still get the message with "Pitch" and "Street" as headers - the 'life on the...' is superfluous for this reader, and a linegap would be good.

But then I just brought 'mimeograph' back to google, so hey...

Lazarus's picture
Lazarus
Activity Score 1536

Ok.

Troll's picture
Troll
Activity Score 672

Nicely done. I actually read it. Long-copy lives. It seems 140 characters is the limit before people lose focus and....oh my word a skittle.

etan's picture
etan
Activity Score 192

great insight, clever copy

www.etanshapiro.com
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