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Wordnerd
6662 pencils

wow.. completely senseless and looks like ass

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mark3r
1940 pencils

Ha! Couldn't have said it better!

:::MARK3R:::

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hahahah

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haha

yea i didnt see it 1st time 2

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Looks like a bad PhotoShop job. I didn't even see it at first. Then, when I did, looks rough.

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no comment on this...Yvan must have a reason.

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bknowlden
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I normally don't attack individuals, but Jon, figure out what you want to do because these are all over the place.

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SeanMartin

Okay, this is obviously a beginner's job, so maybe some constructive criticsm? And all of this is said without knowing how much input the client had in this (which could have been considerable) -- still:

Your shirt buttons are soft focus, but the embroidery work is sharp as a tack.

There's no sense of depth to the boat; honestly I cant tell if that's a photo or an illustration, but either way, it needs a bit of blurring to make it feel more like the image. The spray needs a lot more randomizing and movement: I can tell you used the same piece three times and just pasted them.

Your horizon line is sharp, but it looks like some of the garment was cut away in the process: particularly since, as noted, the buttons are soft.

Doing montages like this are tough, particularly when you're trying to blend so many disparate elements. But you have to decide which one takes centre stage and then work out from there. If you wanted the embroidery to be this sharply focused, we should see a gathering of blur that builds as we move away from that part of the ad. Instead, it jumps from one sense of depth of field to another.

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AdvMan
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What's that :)

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a simple photomontage

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Guest

Haha this is bad. Really bad...

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bad photoshop

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Guest

oooo..kayyy...so that "ocean" was actually a shirt......

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Randallh
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Horrible photoshop. Run out of budget? Or did the new guy out of college get this one to finish up? Either way, fire the Creative Director!

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Crappy Shirts=Crappy Ads

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Crappy Shirts=Crappy Ads

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