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karaba's picture
karaba
Activity Score 112

made me smile at first sight

nikkii's picture
nikkii
Activity Score 14

its a cute ad

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monicamexico
Activity Score 830

The line needs work. Try "Exclusive new plan for current students." You don't need "only".

crisis's picture
crisis
Activity Score 189

It could be better, but adding another adjective isn't going to solve the problem.

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R. Rinaldi
Activity Score 686

Nice try.

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walkingbuddha
Activity Score 188

shit

karaba's picture
karaba
Activity Score 112

made me smile at first sight

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