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amardhembare's picture
amardhembare
Activity Score 3

good work 7/10

Ravages's picture
Ravages
Activity Score 842

Huh? I might disagree with you, Ravi.
Big does not translate to far does not translate to good.

Corbeen's picture
Corbeen
Activity Score 1093

far away so close would be better . anyway still has a big whole to become a good solution.

tipptapp's picture
tipptapp
Activity Score 133

The illustrator did a excellent job!

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
Activity Score 3647

I can see if they win awards or something, but there has been a lot of pretty average student work shwoing up here recently.

Mohammed's picture
Mohammed

Fake ad

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
Activity Score 3647

Not fake, student.

Bauducco's picture
Bauducco
Activity Score 297

Didn´t like this one.

second_creator's picture
second_creator
Activity Score 754

thanx ppl 4 all dat words will dfntly cum out wid more gud stuff

Early to bed, early to rise, work like hell and advertise

copywriter

Spanky's picture
Spanky
Activity Score 4899

i don't see a concept here at all. i'm guessing the illustrator credit is a joke. or did he recreate the logo in illustrator for you? anyway, i would pick a different client than wonderbra to do student work. there's already been way too much incredible work done for them. anything you do will be compared to that.

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

lazy copy.

Rog's picture
Rog
Activity Score 6082

Love the Illustrator credit. Laughed my tits off. ;D

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

Maxwedge's picture
Maxwedge
Activity Score 558

Must agree with above. Maybe try another brand who should be doing edgy stuff, Wonderbra is a too easy target and too similar to where youre trying to go with these.
As far as credits go don't forget to include the creative director, art director, visualiser, designer, finished artist...

puppiepoppy's picture
puppiepoppy
Activity Score 1634

This is FAR from good....way far behind!

Clief Kole's picture
Clief Kole
Activity Score 126

this one has passed me,anyone shade some light please.

adnerd84 's picture
adnerd84

first thought concept.

insideistaing's picture
insideistaing

so far..... it is good:)

shonac's picture
shonac

i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.

shonac's picture
shonac

i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.

shonac's picture
shonac

i think it's alright, but it needs more impact. perhaps an image to accompany the text.

Jarne von Wolfsburg's picture
Jarne von Wolfsburg
Activity Score 264

* * * * *

haha, big props for the illustrator

Nilesh's picture
Nilesh

thats it???
Copy is slapped on the layout.
Done. The Ad is ready.

Sorry. there's a branding too.
A lil more effort done inspite of copying and pasting the text.

saurabhsangai's picture
saurabhsangai
Activity Score 13

:)

amardhembare's picture
amardhembare
Activity Score 3

good work 7/10

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