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Algareto's picture
Algareto
Activity Score 216

Nice copy!

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step 1 step 2
Activity Score 38

Bad illustration.

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white widow
Activity Score 137

This copy is much better than the first´s ad

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second_creator
Activity Score 754

nice

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omni
Activity Score 137

i think the copy is too long.

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fala fulani
Activity Score 254

Alot of that copy is really pointless. The thing about the digital watch, really!!! Its a waste of real estate, but it starts and closes nicely. Should have started more powerfully though.

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JeffWalker
Activity Score 12

The visual(s) are not compelling enough to make people read all that copy–especially with the hand drawn type. However, what a strong tag line! That ad would be so much more effective if the tag line (Children who watch their parents smoke...), was just simply set on a white back ground. This is one of those cases where the art gets in the way of the message.

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