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Kateter's picture
Kateter
2029 pencils

dosen't?

from american agency?

ts, ts, ts... copywriter

shaft_drive's picture
shaft_drive
273 pencils

wow. spelo. in a headline. i think this ad has not been through the proper check process since it's an unimportant (and unsuccessful) attempt at an award.

teenie's picture
teenie
1894 pencils

Nice catch.

That's the most interesting part of the ad.

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture
Jet Propulsion Lab
10683 pencils

Guess who also doesn't have the brain?

WOW, this is TRULY horrible!

But then, it's from Wisconsin...

ivan's picture
ivan

Typo has been fixed!

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

Chough's picture
Chough
147 pencils

Well meaning, Im sure, but this series misses by a mile. Unfortunately, I can imagine the target audience (men who abuse/sleep with underage girls) being completey unaffected by this communication, or even worse, turned on by it. This is not pleasant to look at for the majority – but the majority are not the target. This subject has to handled sensitively, with insight. Disturbing CAN be OK, but these are disturbing, wrong, and even counter productive, and I hope they haven't, and never will run. I'd love to hear what the relevant social services think about these.

Raul_0451's picture
Raul_0451
56 pencils

VERY WELL SAID CHOUGH, VERY BAD AD

Eightball's picture
Eightball
200 pencils

poor

young one's picture
young one
56 pencils

This is wrong!

adamrich's picture
adamrich
48 pencils

very very very wrong!

the_wizArt_of_OZ's picture
the_wizArt_of_OZ
16 pencils

insufficient ad

vwray81's picture
vwray81
256 pencils

Not well executed. My first thought was that this was an ad about dumb models. But after realizing what the message is, something's just not right. It's a serious message with a very silly visual. The visual demeans the importance of the message.

And the typo... are you serious?? Wow.

Angie-chan's picture
Angie-chan
61 pencils

seems that promotes it instead of trying to stop it ^_^'

ecflagcorp's picture
ecflagcorp
108 pencils

Aside for the misspelling, the head doesn't seem proportioned to the body it was put on. It looks too small. And there is too much shadowing of the face. The face needs more contrast, especially around the mouth.

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
3647 pencils

This makes me feel like I'm the pervert.

Don Draper's picture
Don Draper
144 pencils

My sentiments exactly! I'm also shocked that the creatives haven't requested this ad be removed, given it has that huge typo. Where's your pride people?

BoniS's picture
BoniS
87 pencils

Oh Gary Mueller... why would you let your name get posted?

amsterdam73's picture
amsterdam73
374 pencils

My god! Dosen't...

Shaka_Zulu's picture
Shaka_Zulu
116 pencils

Typo - Shnypo... let's focus on the IDEA. I personally think it's a great campaign. Amazing insight - hits home and straight to the point. It doesn't get more real than this... I'm disgusted by grown men who sleep with teenagers and if this doesn't make you think... then you are in the wrong business. And now about the typo... who gives a f#@k?

Now... inspire me!

Bye's picture
Bye
1468 pencils

If you're a copywriter who dismisses a typo in a published ad, then you might be in the wrong business.

Rekker's picture
Rekker
123 pencils

come on guys! freedom of speech! whe are not in the united states here?
it should be normal to bring on this problem in an ad.

my only problem here is that it's an insufficient ad

ivan's picture
ivan

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