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morse's picture
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morse

Very nice idea for any educational company. Good copy.

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doubleoseven's picture
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doubleoseven

Very unexpected for a school. Who said long copy is dead?
Great art direction to go with it.

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Guest

They're all great, but this one is my favorite.

theinspector's picture
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theinspector

I hate long copy. But I love this.
Not the artsy-fartsy approach I'd expect.

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Guest

Ha ha funny, though dark. Very fresh idea.

jackmoore257's picture
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jackmoore257

Great. Very poetic.

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Guest

Very good.

hal9000's picture
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hal9000

Great execution and strategy too. Did not expect this.
Looks like SVA is finally letting ad-people do their ads.
It's about time. These are the best ads they ever did.

anotheropinion's picture
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anotheropinion

Clever and Beautifully done.

adsrule's picture
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adsrule

GREAT! GREAT! GREAT!

elmerella's picture
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elmerella

wow. totally unexpected twist. very well crafted visually and in the copy.

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Guest

School of Visual Arts can't communicate its message but in copy!

kgeiger's picture
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kgeiger

Even though it demands an extremely captivated audience, I especially like how these lack a shortcut to the message in the form of a strapline. I just wonder if the visuals are intriguing enough to get the audience reading the remarkable copy in the first place...

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DBB

Awesome copy.
well done !

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Guest

What I like about this campaign is that the art direction is not overdone.
It lets the copy stand out. Not over-designed like most stuff you see today.
When you have a great idea, you don't need to over-design. Nice work.

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Guest

Bravo.
No shortcuts, no artsy-fartsy, and only those who are interested will ever get through the text and thus to the message behind it.
Clean, not an in-your-eyes ad, not a look-at-how-awesome-we-are and no empty promises.

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Guest

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Guest

Beautifully done with poetry. Brilliant I say.

Hibon's picture
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Hibon

Good.

Simple ideas are the best !

Message Maven's picture
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Message Maven

I love the concept and the copy is nicely done but sadly, for long copy,I wouldn't trust the audience to take the time to appreciate it.

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Guest

Not at all what I expected. Nice.

krautland's picture
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krautland

this is old school competent and that, to me, is a bad thing.

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Guest

Super

Dzsoi's picture
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Dzsoi

I have similar feelings as a guest here: "School of Visual Arts can't communicate its message but in copy!"

What makes this ad outstanding is the copy. And this is for an art school. Although the message fits the product, somehow it's still strange.

dsklan's picture
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dsklan

ugly grafik design for a visual arts skool....

adsadsads's picture
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adsadsads

This campaign is very smart and confident too.
Haven't we all seen enough pretty but vacant work in Lurzers Archive?
Great stuff.

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Guest

Very nice. Unexpected yet very true sentiment. The fact that it's long copy for a visual arts school makes it even more unexpected.

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Guest

Too much enthusiasm. Then it is easy to get suspicious... Those who created this piece are commenting here?

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Guest

Saw these in the One Show too.
Remember squinting while trying to read them.
But they're well worth it.

checkhill's picture
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checkhill

the copy is so good, any product would have looked good at the end, however i don't think it's super for school of visual arts, but the copy is legendary.

CuriousPencil's picture
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CuriousPencil

Poignant words. This isn't copy,
it's poetry.

pabzi007's picture
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pabzi007

This is highly appreciated !!!

somecopywriter's picture
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somecopywriter

These are truly inspirational. Mr Nguyen, you are a master copycrafter.