4 comments

Vipond's picture
Vipond
60 pencils

the moody b+w image loses the shiny-ness that is alluded to. other than that good concept and nice imagery.

eduardojoseph's picture
eduardojoseph

Nice textures, nice light

SeanMartin's picture
SeanMartin

The layout of the copy is severely undercutting the message -- take the last two lines and drop them close to the bottom, and the message would get across more strongly. And please, take off the comma after the end of line three.
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Here, let me save everyone the trouble of asking. "Do you even work in advertising?"

Renan Correa's picture
Renan Correa
186 pencils

I like it. And agree about the comma.

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www.correa.carbonmade.com

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www.cargocollective.com/renancorrea

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