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SeanMartin's picture

Okay, two things immediately come to mind: (1) there's no allowance for the gutter, which means part of your ad is gonna disappear into the binding, and (2) the headline is clunky in its grammar. There's no rhythm to it, which makes it difficult to understand at a cursory look. The illustration here is better than the "falling star" one, but the illustrator still needs to understand layout for these double-wides so the message doesnt get lost in the process of reproduction.