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andyleftyWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 15:20

Trying to rationalise this but I don't get it.

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josh n.Wednesday, October 26, 2011 - 16:00

I get it.. its simple and it makes you think .. good job! i like it..

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TaylormadeWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 16:20

They seem to have enough.

Also, by showing Death's outline, they aren't giving their audience's intelligence much credit

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nemesisWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 16:27

This would've worked just fine only showing the hand and scythe.... the suggestion of the full body underneath was completely unnecesary. It dumbs it down.

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TaylormadeWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 16:51

Also, from now on I will always just write my call to action followed by an exclamation mark. (Buy this car! ... Drink this beer! ... Donate!)

I can't believe I haven't stumbled upon this formula before. So simple. So effective. (Use this ointment!)

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morseWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 22:45

That's a crazy cool idea. I agree. There is no need for the silhouette.

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GeimimaWednesday, October 26, 2011 - 23:53

should be added some bubble there + no silhouette

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pierrelastnameThursday, October 27, 2011 - 00:00

GOOD ONE, CLEAR AND FRESH BLOOD!

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Roger KeynesThursday, October 27, 2011 - 00:22

Nice one.

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Lawson HembreeThursday, October 27, 2011 - 01:20

Death definitely got a sinking feeling when it saw this ad.

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jjfThursday, October 27, 2011 - 02:43

The scythe doubles as a white flag haha

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TexasHThursday, October 27, 2011 - 05:08

Hmm...i like it but it's a bit confusing. Visually, you're saying the death is drown, which is a cool idea. But the words say we need more, which is another idea.
I mean, having this visual (without silhouette) and the only word "Donate." would be enough and, i think, stronger.

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KutberkThursday, October 27, 2011 - 16:55

clever and evil . Like it

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Bill Me NowThursday, October 27, 2011 - 17:41

Visual works, but copy is weak.

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nojThursday, November 3, 2011 - 11:17

i think dont need copy, the visual said all