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teenquey's picture
teenquey
Activity Score 290

I've got to agree, nobody is going to read this long copy.

Michael Wolmans's picture
Michael Wolmans
Activity Score 94

Blasphemy in the first line? Good luck with the South American judges if you have entered this into Cannes!
But fear not, it's not the blatant disregard for a world religion that will mark this one down - the idea will flush it down the toilet to the place where it belongs.

XL's picture
XL
Activity Score 214

As a copywriter I can appreciate good long copy. Unfortunately, this is just plain old long copy. Too long copy. Not interesting enough to keep my attention past the first 2 paragraphs.

Prof's picture
Prof
Activity Score 1449

Really well written though...

Quite really.

CreepingFeature's picture
CreepingFeature
Activity Score 244

Ireland Davenport's "Puts the king in stalking" ads > this

teenquey's picture
teenquey
Activity Score 290

I've got to agree, nobody is going to read this long copy.

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