Ramrod: Pineapple guy

Ramrod: Pineapple guy

Advertising Agency: DraftFCB, Johannesburg, South Africa
Creative Director / Copywriter: Pippa Capstick
Art Director: Paul Coetzer
Executive Creative Director: Marthinus Duckitt

Your rating: None Average: 6.6 (9 votes)

Comments

Blasphemy in the first line? Good luck with the South American judges if you have entered this into Cannes!
But fear not, it's not the blatant disregard for a world religion that will mark this one down - the idea will flush it down the toilet to the place where it belongs.

As a copywriter I can appreciate good long copy. Unfortunately, this is just plain old long copy. Too long copy. Not interesting enough to keep my attention past the first 2 paragraphs.

Really well written though...

Ireland Davenport's "Puts the king in stalking" ads > this

I've got to agree, nobody is going to read this long copy.