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Phil Lestino's picture
Phil Lestino
1680 pencils

As Homer would have said.... "DOH"

somecopywriter's picture
somecopywriter
1107 pencils

Love, love, love this ad.

adda's picture
adda
35 pencils
Shawali's picture
Shawali
8429 pencils

??? It's totally not the same idea....

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

Wordfruit's picture
Wordfruit
1023 pencils

I like it.

I'd say the copy could have got into the more storied stuff like "an alien that wants to call home" quicker. Rather than just having names of objects at the start.

I guess you want to get the idea of a whole list of stuff across quickly, but I'm guessing some people will read just the first few, get the idea, and turn the page.

With some more storied snippets at the beginning -- like maybe from the 3rd or 4th item -- I'm thinking there might be more intrigue, keeping people on the page, and appreciating the ad a little longer.

sacrilegend's picture
sacrilegend
2346 pencils

More like this, please.

andylefty's picture
andylefty
4539 pencils

There's something that makes me feel it must have been done before.
It makes it difficult to judge.

juanix's picture
juanix
3 pencils

Done...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1PoTvIXSxM

translate:
Thanks dad.
what is it?
It's a formula 1 car?
It's a super hero who demolished buildings?
a pirate ship ...?
a castle full of soldiers?

PS: (Rasti = Lego)

Bamboo Marketing Online's picture
Bamboo Marketin...
174 pencils

I have seen some like this before, but I like so much.

kleenex's picture
kleenex
33834 pencils

simple.

Emily Blawyn's picture
Emily Blawyn
114 pencils

simple, nice

Sophie Campbel's picture
Sophie Campbel
164 pencils

very good

Ava Spears's picture
Ava Spears
144 pencils

good ad, very good, simple

Anne's picture
Anne
508 pencils

Simple, classic and super super good.

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