addyhoch10's picture
2592 pencils

too vague and long-winded.

jamesrothenburg's picture
554 pencils

I like the reversal device in these ads. Nice idea. The art direction doesn't help further that idea though. Why the children's style illustration? Is that to show the naivety of the idea? If so, then why the distressed type? (which is very 90's and dated BTW) Too many different directions going on in the art direction. Simplify the art direction and the idea will be much stronger.

Your Nightmare's picture
Your Nightmare

This is really bad idea, with this client you can find other concepts and execution much better, what is this? who is the person that choose this pieces, please i want to see good ads.

griffin7's picture
76 pencils

To recognise the good ads we need to see bad ads. That's the whole point of such a forum.

jamesrothenburg's picture
554 pencils

I agree. I'm pretty sure this is student work, why don't your try discussing what works and what doesn't in the ads? Instead of just saying this good or this is shit.

whitespace's picture
1953 pencils

that's not a single ad that everyone loves.

lava's picture

the concept is nice... could've been better

Maxwedge's picture
558 pencils

Say whaa?

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