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Copy_Can's picture
Copy_Can

This one is disconnected from the other two. The other two refer to an action one did that caused them to be arrested, this one doesn't mention that. Rather, it focuses on a crime that "happened", and your action during the arrest that "sealed the deal" for your arrest.

Overall: Campaign is weak, IMO.

redlightman's picture
redlightman
32 pencils

i could lol

critical_mass's picture
critical_mass
17 pencils

Execution could use a little work, but I really like the headline.

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