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MADE in the USA's picture
MADE in the USA
Activity Score 434

I’m always willing to learn. Please explain why this is “Forceful”.

bknowlden's picture
Activity Score 3647

Take out "Foot Odour?" and see what happens? You let the reader solve it, you don't force it down their throat. They'll even feel intelligent for getting your "inside joke". One shouldn't assume the customer is a moron.

paparazi's picture
Activity Score 10

try to be much more creative? no way...

aboughaly's picture
Activity Score 18

nice i like this

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