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phillsucks's picture
phillsucks
133 pencils

FUÉN

Hahalexander's picture
Hahalexander
140 pencils

maybe this could have worked better in a radio or tv ad

bhuvneshwar.chd's picture
bhuvneshwar.chd
991 pencils

quick & instant add. keep going. . .

"If you are irritated by every rub, how will you be polished?"
— Rumi

kalpesh78's picture
kalpesh78
2580 pencils

yuck

ideas....30 minutes nahi toh free.

dean viii's picture
dean viii
1676 pencils

Comic book type has been used waaaay too much. One example: The Economist. Besides, simply changing ah to ha is lacking the big idea. Simplifying doesn't being simple-minded.

Turk's picture
Turk
140 pencils

Simplicity does not always work!

spinsarah's picture
spinsarah
110 pencils

When I saw this ad, all I thought was "...Uh."
Not a very good sign.

criteria's picture
criteria
29 pencils

first idea?

ace85le's picture
ace85le
3939 pencils

Concept is alright but this is not appealing at all. I would just flip to the next page.

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Kriativity's picture
Kriativity
418 pencils

next!

Zulu-1's picture
Zulu-1
130 pencils

What's up with comic executions lately? Not cool. *Believe Dat*

bathsheba's picture
bathsheba
220 pencils

Idea would have benefited from fresher art direction (i.e. not pop art).

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