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phillsucks's picture
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phillsucks

FUÉN

Hahalexander's picture
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Hahalexander

maybe this could have worked better in a radio or tv ad

bhuvneshwar.chd's picture
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bhuvneshwar.chd

quick & instant add. keep going. . .

"If you are irritated by every rub, how will you be polished?"
— Rumi

kalpesh78's picture
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kalpesh78

yuck

ideas....30 minutes nahi toh free.

dean viii's picture
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dean viii

Comic book type has been used waaaay too much. One example: The Economist. Besides, simply changing ah to ha is lacking the big idea. Simplifying doesn't being simple-minded.

iTurk's picture
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iTurk

Simplicity does not always work!

spinsarah's picture
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spinsarah

When I saw this ad, all I thought was "...Uh."
Not a very good sign.

criteria's picture
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criteria

first idea?

ace85le's picture
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ace85le

Concept is alright but this is not appealing at all. I would just flip to the next page.

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Kriativity's picture
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Kriativity

next!

Zulu-1's picture
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Zulu-1

What's up with comic executions lately? Not cool. *Believe Dat*

kaceres's picture
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kaceres

@Hazan_Ko

bathsheba's picture
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bathsheba

Idea would have benefited from fresher art direction (i.e. not pop art).