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salil.sharma's picture
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salil.sharmaTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 00:49

Good try But as per copy
THINGS ARE NOT CLEAR
LIGHTING WEEK
NO LIGHT IN SOFA & UNDER SIDE OF TABLE
LIGHTING IS POOR

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Where is the ideaTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 03:09

abey laudey...chootnikey

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ZeSheepTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 05:18

hahahaha...as per copy...Lighting is not right...no wonder we get so agitated

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KrishZolTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 02:05

Good Concept....

onepointer's picture
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onepointerTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 02:18

Actually what service they doing , providing magnifier?

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kleenexTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 12:33

selling some sort of glasses.

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artcurieTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 03:30

good concept only

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chamindarathnayakeTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 04:37

Good...

Chaminda Rathnayake

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almasnazeerTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 05:31

The ear stud one was better. As someone pointed out earlier it looks like they are selling magnifying glasses than vision enhancing- products and service.
I wonder why would someone grumble about no proper lighting on the sofa and other areas. Isn't the message apparent?

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MicheleVirgilioTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 05:46

hmm not so good

http://www.mandarinoadv.com

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rocklandTuesday, April 17, 2012 - 13:03

Tan toche!... eso ya esta hechoooooooo!!!!

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/lect_up_lenses_nails

http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/lect_up_lenses_needle

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DAS_13Tuesday, April 17, 2012 - 13:12

I've seen this idea for an optometrist done a thousand times before. I think the ads referenced in the post above do a better job of demonstrating this thought.

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Alexandra GregorWednesday, April 18, 2012 - 02:53

I actually like this very much. In my opinion it's about organization so things (and duties, dates and stuff) don't get lost anymore. In a chaotic environment with chaotic or no organization things get lost very quickly. You forget about things on your not so well handled to do list. I like it.

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WordfruitWednesday, April 18, 2012 - 06:47

I think the idea is ok; not amazing.

And I'd say it'd be better if the object is something you really need to find. If you drop a paperclip and can't find it, it's no great loss to take another one from your desk drawer.

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vladsWednesday, April 18, 2012 - 11:16

good concept a little classic but ok. The retocuh is bad!

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