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Nicola Finetti: Black

Nicola Finetti: Black
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Advertising Agency: JWT Dubai, UAE
Executive Creative Director: Chafic Haddad
Creative Directors / Copywriters / Art Directors / Typographers: Peter Moyse, Adrian An
Photographer: Tejal Patni
Illustrator: Adrian An
Art Buyer: Emily Haddad
Account Supervisors: Francois Kanaan, Prabhakar Iyer
Advertiser's Supervisors: Leena Harazeen, Nicola Finetti

Comments

Zeus's picture 734 pencils

WHAT???

shrrr's picture 69 pencils

death...black...
does it ring a bell?

shrrr's picture 69 pencils

i like it

thirty6chambers's picture 1468 pencils

people wear black to funerals. it's a cultural thing so not everyone in the world will understand this but that's ok. awesome copy none the less.

sunilcreates's picture 18 pencils

what cultural?? nothing to do with this ad and cltural black dress.

Tincho's picture 1105 pencils

Idea is ok but the layout is awful... I hate those divisions.

askon's picture 413 pencils

Anyone else find it funny that Emily the art buyer has the same last name as the CD. Probably why she picked such a shatty photograph

-- 9 out of 10 dentists agree that most people will believe any statistic you throw at them.

ackattak's picture 394 pencils

Great line!

WAIKIKI's picture 12 pencils

bad art direction, but great copy.

Mr. Castanhodo's picture 280 pencils

I agree.

"Talent is luck. The important thing in life is courage."

shoot's picture 36 pencils

funny. really.

Pete2's picture 674 pencils

There's nothing about this ad that works. Awful art direction and awful headline.

Tapper's picture 472 pencils

ok ad, that's it, bad layout. cannot belive this picked up a bronze at cannes though. unbelievable.

Strip. Strip. Strip.

ChuckNorris's picture 832 pencils

Can women really show their skin like that in Dubai?

Truns's picture 53 pencils

so clever.

miko1aj's picture 1339 pencils

Excellent typography, simple layout, beautiful photography. Solid one.

Frits Harkema's picture 713 pencils

Hmmm...if her husband is rich, he would not get an heart attack over a couple of thou. If he is poor, she probably loves him and wants him to live.

Pete2's picture 674 pencils

it's a dumb concept. Move on.

JAG's picture 123 pencils

Tasteless idea.

Rene Fractal's picture 1430 pencils

Good line, good work.

Anurag Sahu's picture 102 pencils

neh neh,,
1. Negative ad
2. Dubai aint open to this art direction
3. The model looks awful

Bottom Line - Concept is atrocious hence ****** up !

pork_eater's picture 455 pencils

Anurag,
please... tell me you're not working in advertising !

pork_eater's picture 455 pencils

Amazing line !
Hats off to the writers !

Pete2's picture 674 pencils

Pork eater. What are you smoking?

pork_eater's picture 455 pencils

Ashes of the husband.

Anurag Sahu's picture 102 pencils

I work in a Pig Farm, as I love eating Pigs.
I’m glad you know about advertising...MATE!!!haha

Marcela Cáceres's picture 112 pencils

great copy, awful layout...

Marcela Cáceres's picture 112 pencils

great copy, awful layout...

004422's picture 4 pencils

Pete2. You must have the IQ and sense-of-humour of a hagfish if you don't get this idea and don't think it's an intelligently funny headline. But you probably don't know what a hagfish is either.

Pete2's picture 674 pencils

I'm not sure what a hagfish is. But if I had to guess, it's either that fucking ugly woman in the red dress, or a creative director from UAE.

On a more serious and constructive note though:

Your headline is soft, almost too polite for the idea. It's written by someone who doesn't have full grasp of the subtleties and power of the English language. Was it written by somebody from India? "The price may give your husband a heart attack. But don't worry, it also comes in black. (Go on, say it with an Indian accent and you'll get my drift.)

A better way to state it would be:

He'll drop dead when you tell him the price. Good thing it also comes in black.

But you probably can't see the difference, can you?

And what the fuck were you drinking when you art directed and selected that photo?

004422's picture 4 pencils

Pete2. Your headline gives the punchline away. It's too obvious.

And my, you are one angry, bitter individual with too much time on your hands. Get a girlfriend.

Pete2's picture 674 pencils

By the way, your strategy is lame too. What does it matter that these dresses are expensive. So is everything else where you come from.

Stella Artois beer took that position years ago. "Expensive, but worth it". It works for beer. But for yet another designer dress, who cares?

bbp's picture 18 pencils

What's going on with this headline design?

The look that you've created works against the brand that you're trying to establish.
High end, exclusive...

This design feels like some bad hip-hop clothing line.

Are those stringy thread things symbolic of the dress falling apart?

Guest's picture
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great line... poor art direction.

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