New Zealand Fire Service: Girl

Without a working smoke alarm consider her dead.

Advertising Agency: M&C Saatchi, Wellington, New Zealand
Executive Creative Director: Dave King
Art Director: James Bowman
Copywriters: Dave King, Steve McCabe, Nicci Doak
Photographer: Stephen Langdon
Retoucher: Denny Monk
Account Services: Christina Mossaidis, Nick Baylis
Via: Bestadsontv

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21 comments

R U serious's picture
R U serious
405 pencils

consider her dead? please...

Idea is good copy is rude.

Say my name, say my name...

atb2005's picture
atb2005
13567 pencils

May seem a little exaggerated, but still. It's not uncommon to die in a fire. I like it; it's bold. Find nothing rude here.

Shadow Ops's picture
Shadow Ops
150 pencils

This is not good

Let's keep advertising fun

Molecule's picture
Molecule
437 pencils

the copy is terrible. The idea is first level

checkhill's picture
checkhill
465 pencils

scary stuff, im not scared of fire, but the writer

Hiperion's picture
Hiperion
3138 pencils

not works for me

pez's picture
pez
1718 pencils

3 copywriters for this?... sorry, is not good at all...

alejulimaty's picture
alejulimaty
838 pencils

bad copys usually take a lot of copywriters

J Designer's picture
J Designer
2420 pencils

I think the copy must be a culture thing - cause I don't find this rude at all.

(I'm from NZ)

vote4pedro's picture
vote4pedro
4601 pencils

You would think that at least one of the three writers would know there should be a comma after alarm.

Tommy G.'s picture
Tommy G.
897 pencils

The smoke is not well done.

Critic's picture
Critic
271 pencils

Alarming!

raavigeorgian's picture
raavigeorgian
2444 pencils

its a rampant practice in advertising to sell the product by intimidating the consumer rather than alarming them engagingly..... god help the consumer.

jessehow's picture
jessehow
37 pencils

smoke looks scary and unrealistic.
bad bad bad copy.

and her smoke alarm doesn't seem to be working either. she's still sleeping. zzz.

CurryJ's picture
CurryJ
955 pencils

Nice copy...not rude at all. Perfectly appropriate for the message.

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I think; therefore I am

Adaddicted's picture
Adaddicted
3435 pencils

me likey.

withalltherespects

imagineit's picture
imagineit
552 pencils

I think this is freaky and yea it does not take 3 writers to write line like this. Please!

perromalo's picture
perromalo
429 pencils

who is paying for the ad? No logo, no nothing.

J Designer's picture
J Designer
2420 pencils

This was made by the New Zealand Fire Service.
They are mentioned in the title. But yes a logo is needed.

rawaa's picture
rawaa
35 pencils

art direction and copy could have been better

Adrian Butler's picture
Adrian Butler
5 pencils

Tragically, this ad gives the WRONG message. The copy states:
"Without a WORKING SMOKE ALARM consider her DEAD" Note: DOES NOT mention the word 'Photoelectric'.

However in another New Zealand Fire Service (NZFS) ad the copy states:
"When you're asleep you'll never notice the deadly poisonous smoke that silently suffocates you. Unless you have a working PHOTOELECTRIC smoke alarm."
See this ad by Googling 'new_zealand_fire_service_feet' Note: DOES mention the word 'Photoelectric'.

So why mention 'Photoelectric' smoke alarms in one ad (which is the New Zealand Fire Service's official position) and only 'Working' smoke alarms in this other ad?
The ionization type of smoke alarm in almost every New Zealand home (and hundreds of millions of homes around the world) have recently been declared to be "deadly".

The public must be given a clear, concise message - NOT Mixed Messages. When using the word 'Working' people think their existing ionisation alarms are OK. No - they are "Deadly".
The NZFS's Official Position on smoke alarms and CBS's 'Deadly Smoke Detectors' exposé are on The World Fire Safety Foundation's website.

We would very much appreciate any comments or feedback - thank you.
Adrian Butler, Chairman, former New Zealand fire Fighter, The World Fire Safety Foundation, Queensland, Australia (global not for profit that does not sell any products or services).

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