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morse's picture
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morse

I don't really understand how is the visual relevant to the product.

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Troll's picture
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Troll

Yet you give it 6 stars?
This campaign missed the mark. Better luck next time.

Nike Diesel's picture
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Nike Diesel

He does this all the time. Very confusing...

nepotiums's picture
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nepotiums

It's quite an abstract approach to the product.But not really aiding to bring it to the mass.

peticaca's picture
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peticaca

Not convinced at all

shahidali's picture
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shahidali

Should work in an obnoxious way. Passing the message but in an awkward way.

shahid

ace85le's picture
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ace85le

nope. doesn't work at all. irrelevant, out-of-place, and confusing (for the mass).

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andylefty's picture
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andylefty

Strange, after seeing two that basically the same.

Nike Diesel's picture
13048 pencils
Nike Diesel

This campaign is not working for me.

Bennygaj08's picture
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Bennygaj08

I wouldn't say this misses the mark: "Makes your whites bright". It's an interesting way to share the message without simply saying it. I would say though, if anything, that this may be over the head of some consumers. They'd have be be quite daft though. But if they aren't, ads like this are a great way to involve the reader because they have to put the pieces together.

Roger Keynes's picture
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Roger Keynes

Agree with you, BennyG.
Plus we've seen similar trains of thought in this category on AotW.
e.g. Light beams, X-Ray etc
Lighten up, kids.

Will Think for Salary

elyoshiro's picture
526 pencils
elyoshiro

Bad

Glut's picture
4083 pencils
Glut

bad art work for a totally fantasy idea.

kleenex's picture
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kleenex

poor execution.

Jackbr's picture
1150 pencils
Jackbr

Bizarrinha...

Jack

Ron Burgundy's picture
1666 pencils
Ron Burgundy

off kilter...works

artyduran's picture
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artyduran

The concept is stronger than the execution. And I'm not convinced that the concept is good enough.

Boxey's picture
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Boxey

She would have to be riding backwards for that to even work.