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Enas's picture
Enas
741 pencils

so what? i don't like , its not teasing me at all

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andrej dwin's picture
andrej dwin
939 pencils

maybe you're simply not the target audience.
I think it's good. not great, not bad. it has a nice idea and works well for me.

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Davosk's picture
Davosk
4815 pencils

She still has a fat arse.

k-rocka's picture
k-rocka
428 pencils

You think that's fat? You've got problems.

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture
BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON
1838 pencils

No she doesn't Davosk, that thing is bangin'

Art Direction - the dated clothes need to be more exaggerated/kitsch/contrasting with the rest.

We're going to need more lube.

Tero Ylitalo's picture
Tero Ylitalo
617 pencils

Is the copy necessary?

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture
BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON
1838 pencils

yes, if you are talking to other ad folk no. But for the public - yes.

We're going to need more lube.

capywriter's picture
capywriter
5511 pencils

I do think the copy is necessary... With all those retro clothing lines these days, especially for sports clothing, and freaky designer things, I wouldn't be surprised to actually see these things worn today. Together with the copy you get the whole picture and you know it's not 'new old clothes' but really old clothes that have been in the closet for years

unaquestionediali's picture
unaquestionediali
484 pencils

i would have exasperated the oldnes of the clothes...
like eighties clothes or even 70s...
but i like the idea, copy is absolutelly necessary!
good job!
;-)

Advertising Pawn's picture
Advertising Pawn
419 pencils

Love the idea + copy is just fine. Art direction is definitely a little dry.

And here I was, terribly playing creative director for a minute of my life.

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lishoyg's picture
lishoyg
73 pencils

nice ass...

eddietanhk's picture
eddietanhk
64 pencils

compare with other two, this clothes more suitable to definition for ads.
simple, nice and easy understand.

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